Week 7 Story: The Fox and His Family
There once was a fox family who lived in the woods. Tod was the youngest member of the family. He had a
mother, a father, an older sister, and a big brother.
One night they were
sleeping in their home, and they woke up because they smelled burning wood. They came out of their
burrow and saw that the entire forest around them was in flames. They were very scared
and had to create a quick plan to get to safety. So, they decided the best place to go was to the watering hole.
Tod's father told the family, "Follow me to the watering hole, quickly." When they reached the watering hole, they were relieved but exhausted from running. It was extremely crowded at the watering hole because many other animals had the same plan as the fox family, so the fox family looked for a less crowded spot to lay down and relax.
Looking around at her exhausted family, mother asked, “Where’s Tod?”
They began to worry that maybe he got lost or didn’t make it to the watering
hole at all. Immediately, they all jumped up and began searching through the
hoard of animals hoping to find him.
Tod was lost and wandering around the watering hole when he saw a little calf and a small tiger standing next to one another.
They looked about his size and his age, so he decided to go up and talk to them.
Tod introduced himself, and they all got to know each other. They told Tod they
were brothers.
The tiger explained to Tod, “We met in the woods one day, and we
were both on our own. Neither one of us knew our families, so we decided to be
each other’s family!” The calf nodded in agreement and said, “Yep and we’ve
been brothers ever since. Want to be brothers with us?” Tod smiled and said, “I actually lost my family too, but I know they are around here somewhere. And I already have two siblings, but we could ALL be a family! After we play we can go find my mom and ask her about it!”
They were having so much fun playing together, until the Tod’s
mother interrupted. “TOD! Why did you wander off like that? I cannot believe you
would do that. Do you know how worried we were?” Tod said to his mom, “I’m
sorry mom...But come meet my new friends!”
After being introduced to them, she asked, “Where are your
parents? I bet they are worried about you two with all this chaos going on.”
Then, the tiger and calf explained to her that neither one of them had
families. Tod’s mother felt terrible for these orphans,
so of course right then she invited the boys into their family. “Come on let’s go back to father,
brother, and sister. They will be excited to see that I found Tod and our two
new family members!”
They all became one big, happy family! YAY!
The end. J
Author's note:
I used two stories from the Tibetan Folk Tale's Unit to make my
story: "The Tiger and the Frog" and "How the Fox Fell a Victim
to His Own Deceit". The first folk tale inspired me to write a story
involving various animals of different species and how the different species
can still understand each other and communicate. The second folk tale inspired
my characters for the story. I used a fox, a tiger, and a calf in my story
because I wanted to use the same characters as the original story. I wanted to
make a story with a happy ending because many of the stories from this unit
were a little disturbing and involved death. I hope you like it!
Image Information: Wild Fox. Wikimedia.
Story source: Tibetan Folk Tales by A.L. Shelton with illustrations by Mildred Bryant (1925).
Hi Tori! I really like this story. I'm always a fan of a happy ending, so I'm glad you had the animals become one big happy family. Was using the name Tod for your fox at all inspired by the movie The Fox and the Hound? Your story reminded me of the cute beginning part of that movie, but with a much happier ending.
ReplyDeleteHi Tori! There definitely are a lot of grim stories in this class, so the happy ending is much appreciated! I also love how you combined two stories from the unit you chose to write your own! I'm always trying to find new ways to be creative with my own stories, but I hadn't thought of drawing inspiration from more than one from the unit. Thanks for the great idea!
ReplyDeleteHi Tori! I was really waiting for something terrible to happen to Tod, and so I had to smile at the ending. It's funny that when everything turns out alright it catches me off-guard. In a way, this story kind of inverted the usual form by putting the most intense moment at the beginning rather than at the end. Very cool, great job!
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ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job combining these stories. I think the most impressive aspect of your story is the amount of detail. The readers are able to imagine every situation because the details really bring the story to life. I also appreciate the great ending! Overall, it was really good!
Hey Tori!
ReplyDeleteThis story was so cute and I loved that it had a happy ending to it. You incorporated the two stories well and I liked that you used an animal dynamic in your story. While I was reading the story, I was expecting something bad to happen to Tod since he was always running off and what not, but I'm glad that he managed to meet new friends. Your story was great, and I look forward to reading others!
Hey Tori! I really enjoyed reading this story and I thought it was super cute! I loved that it had a happy ending to it and didn't end with a betrayal or death, like many other stories we read. Great job with the characters and their dialogues! Good luck with the rest of the semester and all of the stories in this class!
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